Dear Miss Siti
I have made changes the essay according to your comment . Thank you for helping me. tq





















Thank you for sending your assignment. Here is the feedback. Please work on the changes and resend the amended ones before 5 Aug 2011.~Siti, 2 Aug 2011



our topic is leadership in the family

the important thing to have leadership in a family

  • the lead of a family is to guide their member to be a strong family
  • leadership in the family make sure that there is no dicrimination in the family,
  • a lead of a family should be fair to all member and fullfill all their needs squarely
  • the lead and the member in a family should work together to build a healthy family
  • a lead of a family can't build a family on his own way without knowing or caring what the member think about the other member of the family
  • a lead of a family is a factor of a risk wellbeing or disaster family

the cicumstances of the family without leadership
  • no love connection among the member of the family
  • a lot of juvenile happened in a disaster family
  • society have no quality of youth product
  • the beginner of criminal


http://www.schulersolutions.com/family_leadership.html


we have made changes to our topic. our new topic is

The features ofa happy family

here is our note making and essay






http://www.betterhealth.vic.gov.au/bhcv2/bhcarticles.nsf/pages/Families_what_makes_them_happy